What should we do?

We recognize that our original idea may not work for a number of reasons. Which is why we decided to come up with a back up plan. The back up plan will give off more of an isolated atmosphere. The idea is to film someone wearing ragged clothes and disheveled hair walking alone in an uncomfortable environment. We will have title captions appear on the environment in which they are running. We will use silence to help with the feelings. Then when the person steps on something breakable we will make it loud. At the end it will show the person chasing the other person then the name of the director will show. The person who is chasing after the other will wear a ski mask. Along with the reveal of the chaser we will have the silence break and be replaced with the runner breathing heavily. Our second pitch is to have there being a person running from people that are trying to hurt/harm them. It would be taking place on a sidewalk. The person would look tired to show that they have been running for a while. It would be shot in a way that would make the viewer feel like “woah, what is happening”. That feeling would make them get more interested and want to find out what happens next. I was also thinking that after the person runs we see them hide behind a corner. After hiding behind the corner we would see a title and the opening credits would start. I decided that this would be a good pitch to use because it is an interesting concept. It is something that grabs your focus and makes you want to know more.